http://yuki_mura12.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] yuki-mura12.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] alchemyalice 2010-09-23 11:08 am (UTC)

Wow

I second everything people said above: that was wonderful! (and I too find this too great to see any plotholes: you're just that good!)
The scene with Dean searching for his Angel piece and feeling Cas's Grace, and what happen later, is really well written: I could vividly imagine how Dean felt the Grace, how torn Cas really is...
Then the almost confession of love (that is one coming from Dean really) made me smile softly...
And Sam with his angelic heartburn made me laugh!
XD
Also, I love your Michael and how Lucifer is studbornly clinging to his preconceptions...
The bit with Dean never horseman enough to be dangerous to him is so going to bite him in the ass!
(Am I stange to wants Dean to lose even more of his Humanity? Because I wants to see him more Horsemanized!)
I loved it! <3 <3 <3

Winged Golden Tiger

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