Oh my goodness, thank you so much! I am so pleased and relieved that you like it! There was a lot of growling at my laptop and violent deletion involved in the writing process, and your comment has made that totally worth it.

(And thank you for the typo catch. I was having major issues deciding what tense I wanted that section to be in, and clearly waffling back and forth left some stupidity behind. Is now fixed :D)