Date: 21 Jul 2010 14:17 (UTC)
Wow. I absolutely love this!

I think it's perfect that Peter keeps a cool head when he realizes that Alt!Livia isn't his Olivia and how our Olivia isn't freaking out and is trying to remain calm and in control. All very in character. I even like how you hinted at Peter and alt!Livia's ability to communicate without words, as if that transcends the universes. So eloquent! 2 thumbs way up!
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