A request

Hey lovely f-listers,

Would anyone be willing to do some beta-reading/concrit of the upcoming chapter of 'On the Wings of War'? The plot is giving me major difficulties (as in, good god I know this is going somewhere, now if only I knew WHERE), which may be leading to some unevenness in the tone and pacing, and I'd just really love if someone could give me a new perspective on it. Payment would be in the form of love and/or commentfic.

Thanks in advance!