I really liked how you described both of them and how they interacted. The dialogue was great; it was right-on with the characters. The little but really meaningful details showed well. The choice of words you used in molding sentences were amazing.
Your writing style is soooooo beautiful. I enjoyed reading every paragraph, sentence, word. It was GOOD. Really good. Really, really good. ♥
And now I'm going to add this to my memories for sure~ ♥ Thanks so much for sharing! T'was a good read, ne! :)))
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Date: 3 Apr 2011 19:30 (UTC)I really liked how you described both of them and how they interacted. The dialogue was great; it was right-on with the characters. The little but really meaningful details showed well. The choice of words you used in molding sentences were amazing.
Your writing style is soooooo beautiful. I enjoyed reading every paragraph, sentence, word. It was GOOD. Really good. Really, really good. ♥
And now I'm going to add this to my memories for sure~ ♥
Thanks so much for sharing! T'was a good read, ne! :)))